The radial lines in the sky and mountains form a wonderful pattern . The dark form at the bottom is very heavy and disrupts the radial flow, perhaps if you add white marks on top to lighten and give movement to that form it would integrate it back into the overall composition.
Your gouache paintings are lovely and I hope that you continue to paint.
The radial lines in the sky and mountains form a wonderful pattern . The dark form at the bottom is very heavy and disrupts the radial flow, perhaps if you add white marks on top to lighten and give movement to that form it would integrate it back into the overall composition.
Your gouache paintings are lovely and I hope that you continue to paint.